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First, you need to find the two guys who are friends, and one is more the leader than the other. However, they should not have that "Leader/ultra-cool friend who isn't a follower" dynamic of Frankie and Dino or Wyatt Earp and Doc Holliday or Butch and Sundance. They must have a proper Leader/First Lt. vibe. They also should have established relationships with women; don't worry, you can write around that. Okay, got your fellas? Let's go!

  • Present tense story from submissive friend's pov

  • Dominant friend suddenly wants to fuck and orchestrates it

  • Sub secretly loves Dom, so he goes along, likes it, wants more

  • Dom always ends it before Sub wants it to end

  • Sub is actually in love

  • Dom either just messing about or experimenting or having fun before he marries the right girl or fulfills some other family obligation

  • Tense parting where nothing is said

  • Sub fucks his girl thinking of Dom

  • Months later, Sub hears from or runs into Dom

  • Sub still with his girl, Dom still with his girl

  • Dom reveals, in subtle code that only the two of them can understand, that he loves sub just as much as sub loves dom

  • This ambiguous line should be the last line of the fic

  • Angst, but perfect love because it never actually becomes a relationship

  • fin.


How great is THAT? Everybody wants a lover like that!

Thanks to CC, who made me post this.
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